"define"

topic posted Fri, November 12, 2004 - 6:46 PM by  Atomictoilet...
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"define"


spark to fire on raw flesh fed
by heady tobacco breath

furrows carved in trembling skin
by cold ice pick fingers

clenched in the gateway of birth
by undulating prurience

squashed on the pavement of reality
by intimacy abandoned

...what kind of fuckery is this?


04/23/03 by atomictoiletbrush
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  • Re: "define"

    Fri, November 12, 2004 - 7:28 PM
    i read this out loud a couple times and decided, "wow, he left the date, the signature, AND a copyright dislamer thing. man I SO wanna kick this person in the balls."

    and then i read it some more and looked up prurience and read it some more... and well, it grew on me alot. Very cold and rigid. I enjoyed reading it. very cool


    11/12/04 by DScrews
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    • Re: "define"

      Fri, November 12, 2004 - 8:21 PM
      I'm almost surprized that I have any balls left to kick these days, but just checked on 'em, and I put on my metal jock-strap, so I suggest that you put on some steel-toes, my friend! Anyway, in posting my "work", I feel that it's necessary to protect it - - although I get incredible pleasure and a lot of "therapy" from writing, I take writing seriously and I put some serious effort into it. I'm continually reviewing, revising, and trying to make my finished product as close to my own ideal for the work as I can. I do all of this first and foremost for myself, to please myself, and to adhere to my personal standards. I'm not trying to be a pretentious asshole - - I just believe that if I take the time to put serious effort into writing, I need to take my writing seriously enough to be protective of it - - whether it gains any "outside success" or not. Thanks for your comments - - I appreciate that you gave some of your time to reading this piece, and thanks for the compliment!

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