Cartwheels

topic posted Wed, November 10, 2004 - 3:38 PM by  glen
its a marble-headed monster
leaking transfusions
the blood creeps along
with a smile
spellbound and defiant
the criminal disease
is eating lunch alfresco
sunshine is released,
transmuted

by the bay window
with stars glowing in
the feeble-minded ogre
is counting sheep
the sun is asleep
and turned to stone
nightime stretches endless
amid the mist and moon
posted by:
glen
Kentucky
  • Re: Cartwheels

    Wed, November 10, 2004 - 3:57 PM
    after a few reads i started to connect a little more with the first stanza.

    The last two lines go together quite well. Like they're both needed as the wrap up to the piece.

    dscreWs

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